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I would.

I would, if I could
And I probably should
Point out all things
Good and fair
About Philip and his facial hair.

His beard of honey
and his skandisnout
Oh Philip, you're cute as a button
"me little trout"

I would, if I could
And I probably should
Praise all the things
Good and dear
About Philip and his manly beard.

But, I'm no profound poet
I can hardly make a rhyme.
And I can't manage metres
To justly praise,
How well he wields a spear.

But, if I could write a poem,
If I could make a rhyme
And follow a decent metre
To list all things
Good and fair about you dear....
I would....
©2008-2009 ~ScytheLust
:iconscythelust:

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Here is a little poem I wrote in restitution for my presumptuous ways.
Praising :iconsard2:..as he is a wonderful creature who both earned it and deserves it. :=)

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:iconsard2:
If I could make strange dA work according to my wishes, I would have some or other "love" smiley here.

You poem did brighten my day. A day that otherwise started by things that may or may not have been a dream, and then awakening in a bed stained with black vomit, and a seriously lack of some or such female fondling my beard, telling me that all would be fine in the morning. So, a day needing brigthening..

ALSO
The idea seems philipean ;)

--
Fæ dør
Frænde dør
Selv jeg dør engang
Men et jeg ved
Som aldrig dør
Dommen over hver mands død

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:iconscythelust:
I don't mean to alarm you, but...your liver seems pissed. :S

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Språk är en tråd genom tidens flod...
Varje man är sin egen konung.
:iconsard2:
How so? The blackness of the vomit is, I am sure, due to the ale

--
Fæ dør
Frænde dør
Selv jeg dør engang
Men et jeg ved
Som aldrig dør
Dommen over hver mands død

Proud memeber of the dA Viking club: [link]

dAne [link]

Drafted memeber of [link]

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